Давайте вместе переведём «Okami»

Я только за. На каком этапе будем отделять болтовню?

Наконец-то я нашел где можно купить диск этой игры, думаю к концу месяца пришлют, тогда дело пойдет веселее

 

Хых, ребятишки, я и не думал, что вы так рано начнете обламывать сами себя.

 

Да можно и сюжетные диалоги обкарнать, чё уж мелочиться. : То, что ближе к концу, ваще нафиг не надо переводить - всё равно далеко не все до финала доберутся.

 

Я и не думаю что игру можно перевести до конца вдвоем. Очень большой объем, рано или поздно это надоест. Вот если б каждый флудер на форуме перевел по предложению вместо пустословия... хотя нет, вы слишком ограничены...

 

Okami = Оками. Я все еще ограничен?

 

{герои подходят к реке}

Иссан: The River of the Heavens? They mean the fabled Stardust river?
But I sure don't sec anything like that around hero.
It couldn't be that little puddle over there, could It?

{около указателя - камня}

Иссан: The River of the Heaven?? They mean the fabled Stardust river?
But I sure don't sec anything like that around here.
It couldn't be that little puddle over there, could it?

{появляется первое созвездие}
Иссан: Wow! look at the tints twinkle!
I haven't seen such a beautiful nighttime sky in ages.
Hoy, look! Are those stars forming a pattern, or is it just me?
Hmm...
There's one missing…
Guess I’II just have to draw the missing start!
Bah...
Looks like I'm just not ready to draw missing stars.
Press Rl button to hold the
brush, then the [] button to draw.
I sure spent a hock of a lotta time practicing that. *mumble*
Well, it's no use just sitting around thinking about it.
This time the great Issun's gonna put everything he has into it!
Bah! I know this is flu right way to do it!

{из созвездия появляется дракон Yomigami }

Yomigami: Ah...
Why, if it isn't mother Amatrasu.
I apologize for not contacting you sooner during these long years.
Having never forgotten you, I, Yomigami, god of restoration,
have eagerly awaited this day when we could again meet.
While you were away, the 13 spirits of the brush that you
once possessed, including myself,
have been scattered across this land of men, and now lie in disarray.
I became a constellation and managed to survive until now.
The time has come for you to seek out and reunite all the techniques.
Your power is what is needed to restore the dried riverbed of
the heavens and renew the flow of stardust.

Иссан: Wow! That was Yomigami, the god of Rejuvenation!
Wait... So you have the bower of Rejuvenation now!?
Can you really use it to restore
The river of the Heaven?
That would moan you wore as good with a brush as yours truly!
Nah... It couldn't be true.
Who else could master this incredible god technique!?

{река восстановлена}

Иссан: Whoa!
A river of Stardust!
So this really must be the River of the Heavens.
But what I really wanna know is who the heck drew the darn thing!

{подходим к порталу, при появлении портала надпись «You obtained: Astal Pouch»}

Иссан: Look what you found, furball!
This Astral Pouch here's amazing. If can swallow up lots of food.
Then when it's full, it can revive its owner if he dies!
Let's start feeding it with whatever food we can find around here.

{Нашли: You consumed: Orange
Orange with sharp citrus taste. Fills Astral Pouch a little bit.
}

{Нашли: You consumed: Peach
Juicy and fragrant peach. Fills Astral Pouch a little bit.
}

{Нашли: You consumed: Apple
Nectar-filled sour apple. Fills Astral Pouch a little bit.
}

{указатель: “Fountain of Nagi”}

Иссан: Nagi? What's his name doing
here?

{Нашли: You consumed: Dumplings
Doughy balls made from grain. Fills Astral Pouch a little bit.
}

{подходим к статуе со отломленным мечом}

Иссан: Is this...
Is this the legendary shrine? We must be in the Cave of Nagi!
The legendary hero Nagi is enshrined here! He vanquished evil
100 years ago with the help of the white wolf, Shiranui!
First the River of the Heavens now this place...
Where the heck are we, furball?
Boy, this place is a wreck
See? That sword's in really bad shape.
The gods sure didn't do much to protect this place.

{меч дорисован}

Иссан: That really WAS your brushwork ill this time!
How'd you get so good? Exactly who arc you, anyway?

{видим очередное созвездие}

Иссан: Hey, there's another constellation!
This one looks like a...

{дорисовываем созвездие, появляется мышь (кошка?) с мечом}

Tachigami: Well, well, well...
If it isn't mother Amaterasu.
It's been a long time. But with all these monsters around, the
only place I could hide was in this shrine dedicated to ancient heroes.
If there is anything I can do to assist you in your endeavors,
I'm at your service.
Make good use of this sword, as it was designed to conquer evil.

Иссан: Hey, that was the god, Tachigami,
master of the Power Slash technique.
Wait a minute. If you're getting all these powers...
Then you're just like that Shiranui!
You know, the wolf who fought and died alongside the great Nagi.
When Shirnnui died, the wolf's power was split into the 13 brush gods.
This is crazy. Shiranui and Nagi? It's just like the legend.
Well, anyway, I've never seen this Power Slash technique myself.

{показывают камень}

Иссан: How 'bout showing your stuff off on that boulder over there?
Lemme see you slice it in half by drawing a single line!
I won’t believe it till I see it!

{разрезаем камень кистью}

Иссан: Wow!
I didn't think you had it in ya, fiirball!
I'm not even in the same league w you!
Guess I really overestimated myself.
Hey, furball...
Er... I mean, Amaterasu... I've made up my mind!
If you're Shiranui reborn, then that means you can master all
13 techniques, right?
In that case, I think I'll tag along until I'm as good as you!
lucky you!
Heh heh... It's no use tryin’ to
change my mind.
There's no stoppin' mo once I've made a decision!
But enough about mo! Now that you've mastered the Power Slash,
you can cut down that thing Sakuya was talking about.
Let's go back and give it a shot!

{показывают опять статую}

Иссан: What a magnificent statue.
The legendary hero Nagi... I always wanted to draw him.

{показывают решетку, закрывшую выход}

Иссан: I don't think you could fit through here.
Why don't you use your now power on if?
Give it a good clean stroke!

{первое нападение монстров}

Иссан: What the!?
Where'd they come from!?
Ah, whatever. Draw first, ask questions later, right?
You know that Divine Instrument you have on your back?
Well, press the [] button to use its power against them!

{второе нападение}

Иссан: Look, Ammy!
Once you've caught 'em off guard and turned 'em black and white,
they're easy prey for your brush, no matter how nasty they are!
Grab your brush and give 'em a Power Slash!

 

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Работа над ошипками. Это действительно _первый_ ролик в игре:

Once upon a lime, in a faraway land...
There was a tiny village by the name of Kimiki.
Legend tells of a horrible beast that threatened the residents.
It also tells of the wolf that risked it all to protect them.
Controlling the very fabric of existence, this wolf stood up
against a beast many times its size and banished the darkness.
This ethereal wolf's valiant act ushered in an era of tranquility.
The villagers' hearts swelled with respect and adoration of the wolf.
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Это кисти, инструкции к ним:

Rejuvenation:
1/7 One of the B Celestial Brush powers. Mastered by Yomigami.
2/7 Fill in areas where something once existed to restore tint object.
3/7 This fulfilling power is known as Rejuvenation.
4/7 Rejuvenation Tips
5/7 Press the «треугольник» button hard to widen the breadth of your stroke and
6/7 you might find it easier to fill areas in completely.
7/7 Don't aim for artistic beauty. Just fill it in as best you can.

Power Slash:
1/11 One of the 13 Celestial Brush powers. Mastered by Tachigami.
2/11 Etch a sharp and straight line, and the ink becomes like a blade.
3/11 This is the Power Slash, a move that can slice through almost anything.
4/11 * Power Slash Tips *
5/11 As long as the stroke is straight, it needn't be long.
6/11 If your lines come out curvy, hold the X button as you draw.
7/11 When properly aligned, multiple targets can be cut it once.
8/11 The right analog stick can be used to adjust the camera angle to get
9/11 a better view even while yon w drawing with the R1 button.
10/11 Battle may be hectic, but you can take a breather while drawing.
11/11 Don't be sloppy with the brush. Take your time. Don't rush.

 

ААА,



Я погамал - прикольно.
Но вот вам переводить это...
Я вас поздравляю!

 

Кто-то говорил, что будет просто? ;-)

 

Я что-то недопонимаю, или в работе над ошибками в первой же строке пара ошибок ?
Все, пошел переводить

P.S. Ношел вот по поводу локализации

 

Да нет вроде… ПРОМТ говорит что-то типа «однажды в дальних землях». Что есть lime я понятия не имею.

Там не менее 1500 страниц текста? Печально. С таким объёмом нам не справиться. Как я говорил чуть выше, будем переводить только то, что прошел Ваан. А вообще игры делать уметь надо. Ну почему в SotC и ICO текста почти нет, а считаются лучшими играми на PS2?

 

это не lime, это time, а читается фраза "Once upon a time" как "однажды, давным давно...".

 

Да ужас ваще, в конец оборзели сволочи. Так и норовят запихнуть в игры побольше злосчастных буковок - будто б читает их кто.

 

Шутки, шутками, но некоторые считают графоманство болезнью.

 

Остально будет позже

 

Много кто много что чего считает. Всем не угодишь.

 

Да пускай хоть кара божья. К современным играм вообще и Оками в частности это никакого отношения не имеет. Игры давно вышли из того возраста, када из надписей нужны были только "Press Start", "High Score" и "Game Over". Не в Ice Climber какой играем, ведь.

 

Ужос просто, УЖОС.

З.Ы. Про lime конечно сильно отожгли. Даже ШРЕК начинается этими словами :tabako1:

 

Вот за что я нелюблю РПГ так за тонны бессмысленого текста которые приходится считывать/сослушивать с экрана вместо того что б играть. Ну это я о наболевшем...

Ты пробовал смотреть файлы игры в хекс-редакторе, неужто там текст зашифрован? Хотя думаю перед тем как сканировать с экрана ты попробовал и этот вариант.

 

А ты пробовал не играть в РПГ? Есть масса других игр, где текста совсем не много.